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Yassa, April 4th, 2010, 6:22 pm ( Reply )


Yeah, I know... most boring chapter page EVER T-T sorry guys!

By the way...
I have a favour to ask please... ;A;
I need a Beta reader... my english grammar sucks, so I need someone who can look through the finished pages and correct the (thousands XD ) grammar mistakes before I upload them here...
Please PM me if you're intrested ^-^
Thank you in advance, I'd really really appreciate your help!




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User Comments:
RoxasMuffin, April 4th, 2010, 6:31 pm ( Reply )


PikaChu is getting more and more handsome each chapter 8'D

Edit:
OH MY GOD, DID I SERIOUSLY TAKE THE VIRGINITY OF THE BEST COMIC IN THE WORLD?


....Yessssss xD


KyattoWing, April 4th, 2010, 6:47 pm ( Reply )


DARN just missed the virginity xDDD;;
And it may not be the most exciting page but its still really well drawn and Pika looks smexy xD


neogirl999202, April 4th, 2010, 6:50 pm ( Reply )


Nooo, your art style is so pretty, it could never be boring~<3
I really love how you toneee >w<
It is so cute omg omg omg ^u^


duckies, April 4th, 2010, 6:52 pm ( Reply )


teh ehh, he smexy XD


YUI, April 4th, 2010, 6:53 pm ( Reply )


8DDDD Hawt


Hershey-Morning, April 4th, 2010, 7:05 pm ( Reply )


Your English grammar doesn't suck D8;


Gumibearcanibal, April 4th, 2010, 7:05 pm ( Reply )


Kawaii


death-phantom-wolf, April 4th, 2010, 7:07 pm ( Reply )


Ohhh my god you're updating again! >u<
ffffuuuu this is really adorable. And I'd love to be the grammer person, but I never really go on this that muchh D:


Random REEduhr (Guest), April 4th, 2010, 7:16 pm ( Reply )


I'd love to help but I wouldnt know how you'd send them to me...


RyuNoHime, April 4th, 2010, 7:30 pm ( Reply )


Boring isn't exactly the word. I'd say.. Sexy is a better description word :I
ftt and I'd totally help on editing-- but my manga awaits attention~ And I'd probably just make it worse.
OTL
But honestly your english grammar is very fair. Very Fair indeed.
Much better than most people I know from other countries and some American people I know xD
Love you Yassa babe
Ohyeah and have an awesome Easter

(I'll draw you something up fast tonight for a fanart cause I know how much you love baby chicks n' all)


coolchan, April 4th, 2010, 7:39 pm ( Reply )


I'd be happy to help you edit. I'm a little busy, but I'm sure it won't take too long, since I can always understand what you mean, it's just a matter of cleaning it up a little. Honestly, your English is really good for a non-native speaker. C:
You can PM me if you want.


Minikimii (Guest), April 4th, 2010, 7:40 pm ( Reply )

Need Help?
I'm willing to beta/look over your English before you post if you'd like. There's not much to go on from this comment here regarding the way I edit English. Still, if you'd like to contact me, I'm reachable via deviantArt. I have the same name there as I do here (and, incidentally, everywhere else on the internet. -_- ) so feel free to message me. :)

minikimii.deviantart.com


Chikage Godo, April 4th, 2010, 7:57 pm ( Reply )


aayiiiiiiieeeh *U* i'm falling in love more and more with Pika.


ghostlyhammer78, April 4th, 2010, 8:10 pm ( Reply )


Haha, RoxasMuffin-san...XD Dayum, I'm looking forward to this chapter, oh my, yus I am...(grins)


SapphireSophilia, April 4th, 2010, 8:25 pm ( Reply )


i agree, hawt pika ^_^
will we be learning what's up with pia in this chapter?


ract, April 4th, 2010, 8:26 pm ( Reply )


Girl, your English is fine! And I'm a part of the grammar police! XD

And have you ever considered making an original manga/comic?? You would be so great at it!!!!!


lifeless-fighterunit, April 4th, 2010, 8:58 pm ( Reply )

help?
If you need help, well I can give you my eyes and hands. lol I work with people from many countries, and I've been raised by an editor
email me: lifeless_fighterunit@yahoo.com


ark633, April 4th, 2010, 9:18 pm ( Reply )

grammar
I could help, grammar is easy to correct. Besides, I would be happy just being able to read more pages of this comic.


Tempo, April 4th, 2010, 9:48 pm ( Reply )


Oooh! So pretty! I like it a lot! And if you ever need help I'll do it.


Jennar, April 4th, 2010, 9:56 pm ( Reply )

MMMM
Dang.I think the grammer is good ^^

I'd love to help you,but...I dont want to fuck up a good thing ^^'


kat_star01, April 4th, 2010, 10:06 pm ( Reply )


ho man....
This cover...
Just made me jiz


Koro, April 4th, 2010, 10:57 pm ( Reply )


more psyduck now? ; ;


constant_boredom, April 4th, 2010, 11:45 pm ( Reply )


Your grammar's been fine so far, don't worry about it :) But I could help out if you want =D the only thing is that I wouldn't know how to change it on the page :S


MimiChan (Guest), April 4th, 2010, 11:56 pm ( Reply )

I could
I love correcting grammar and spelling! I could :3

contact me on my dA page(www.blitzwilson.deviantart.com) or on my email Greg_Cipes_is_Hot@hotmail.com


Delition, April 5th, 2010, 12:09 am ( Reply )


I wouldn't mind helping ya out there~! =w=b unless you got somebody else than thats okay too!! ^__________^ I hope that you get someone to help you!! ; 0 ; GOOD LUCK~! <333333


seiracchi, April 5th, 2010, 12:39 am ( Reply )


Uwaah, Pika, why are you so pretty? owo~! <3 I cant wait for the new chaper Yassa~ Good luck finding a beta!


crystalslashlover, April 5th, 2010, 12:57 am ( Reply )

Grammar
I could correct the mistakes! I'm sure someone else has already gotten the beta job, but I might as well try~


Yexis, April 5th, 2010, 1:10 am ( Reply )


I would love to beta! Contact me at zemyxaphile@yahoo.com if you'd like. 8D
*might be a grammar nazi*

Simple is okay. Maybe Pika is contemplating his inner turmoil? :V


rakka981, April 5th, 2010, 2:26 am ( Reply )


need more.


Mirazie, April 5th, 2010, 3:21 am ( Reply )


Once again, if you want me to do it honey, just send me the pages n.n I know I'm not perfect at english or anything, but if you would feel more comfortable that someone you know does the correction... well, you know I'm here for you n.n but like I said, I'm not perfect myself either, so it's fine if you won't use me =w= I swear to God, no hard feelings xD <3 mmmmmmh, and I can't wait to see the next couple of pages toned QwQ <3


nuttyjigs, April 5th, 2010, 3:49 am ( Reply )


I've seen worse. Faaaaaaaaaaaar worse. So awful grammar the skies could cry.

Back to fangirlyness:
PIKA!!!! <3 *squish*


princuu, April 5th, 2010, 3:50 am ( Reply )


MOAR. Me could do correction. Me good at grammar. xD
Yeah right, like I'm good with English. Pfffffffffffffff. Fffff. FFFF.


SpikyRoxas, April 5th, 2010, 4:39 am ( Reply )


XD Pikachu looks like a badass! Great drawing!


iamseth, April 5th, 2010, 7:01 am ( Reply )

Grammar (copy)
Same Here! *waves*


Kate09190, April 5th, 2010, 9:07 am ( Reply )


Yay, Pikachu!


aishite imasu., April 5th, 2010, 9:42 am ( Reply )


I lurves Pika so much <3


MariiSpoon, April 5th, 2010, 9:52 am ( Reply )


dark pikachu ._.


Radioactive Sin, April 5th, 2010, 11:54 am ( Reply )


I GET ITT!!!!
PikaSEMEchu
SEMEMEME!
PIKACHUS THE SEME!
*slow*


kuroi_hitsuji, April 5th, 2010, 12:56 pm ( Reply )

Grammar
Uhm...well I think I already posted on the pages if any of your grammar was off..and I plan to do the same from now on. I tend to do that with comics I read. XD


weirdcartoonist, April 5th, 2010, 4:00 pm ( Reply )


it may be simple, but it's still really pretty! o3o

And I would love to help You out, but I have the same problem, ahaha~XD"


faonthenekkid, April 5th, 2010, 4:10 pm ( Reply )


Beautiful <3


XxEcxxX, April 5th, 2010, 5:05 pm ( Reply )


Pika looks so hot =^u^=


kurasa, April 5th, 2010, 6:15 pm ( Reply )


TTATT

please continue. D:

the suspense is killing me O:

i love this comic, your art is like OMFG HOW DID YOU DO THAT. <3


Lynlia (Guest), April 5th, 2010, 7:12 pm ( Reply )


i'd like to help out with them
but i don't have an account
sorry. but please continue!!!


ManicCookie, April 5th, 2010, 9:51 pm ( Reply )


yay!


a.little.bit.not.right., April 6th, 2010, 2:11 am ( Reply )


I love his hair! =u=


Helen-Green, April 6th, 2010, 12:08 pm ( Reply )

omg!!
yay! New chapter!! Your comic is the best thing on the world!!! xD


TriangleHead, April 6th, 2010, 1:20 pm ( Reply )


omg. I so wanna be the english grammar person. That would complete my life. :D

I can't wait for this chapter, I want to see more Ash x Pika shiz and I can't wait for some stuff to happen between Misty and Psyduck! dshfussals


Axlish, April 6th, 2010, 1:40 pm ( Reply )


I bookmarked this so long ago and just now started reading it. And now I'm all caught up and I'm like addicted. ;o; So much love for this comic.


srinitybeast, April 6th, 2010, 7:18 pm ( Reply )


WOOOOOW! You are da beastiest eva! D:


Kaiji_Kun, April 6th, 2010, 7:23 pm ( Reply )


I have to agree with the dozens of other comments that praise this page. No action? Who cares! We have a quite sexy humanoid Pikachu to stare at!


Anelir-Sensei, April 6th, 2010, 11:23 pm ( Reply )


I have so much time. I have a few classes on tue and thurs but i have so much time in between classes that i have to wait i am bored to tears. I would love to beta for you if you would like. ^^ I am going to be majoring in English so it would be good help to me as well XD


Seme, April 6th, 2010, 11:25 pm ( Reply )


Woah~~ HAWTNESS!! <3


artychick2009, April 7th, 2010, 12:20 am ( Reply )


just noticed that Brock isn't in the comic... will he later?


Vagui, April 7th, 2010, 1:45 am ( Reply )


dfjhskdghdjklsfg omg *-* this is so awesome
is the first coment that I made, sorry for that xD
haha but omgs I love it all and the last chapter *dies*
hahaha *-*
thanks for this, really really excelent~~~
<3


UNKNOW (Guest), April 8th, 2010, 2:24 am ( Reply )


what's hell that? i never seen that. i want know about. let me know. thank sir. i never tell you my real name. later see u.


mikani, May 5th, 2010, 9:20 am ( Reply )

oh my
pika's hawt >.<


Aya-shii, June 12th, 2010, 8:40 pm ( Reply )

* 0 *
Okay so , I created an account only to be able to leave you a comment ( and maybe do a comic one day > . > ... xDD )

Okay so , this far ... I'M SO FAN WITH YOUR COMIC *qqqq*
The idea is soooo GREAT ! And the characters are so well done .. My gosh .. they are sooooo sexy * drools *
And dark Pikachu is damn cool * . * So yeah ..
Love it all * ___ *

( sorry for my english , I'm french XP )


ohemgeyitsmey (Guest), July 1st, 2010, 5:39 pm ( Reply )

PIKACHU.
IS SO HOT. c: O,.O NOSE BLEED. xD


rakka981, November 12th, 2010, 9:47 pm ( Reply )


steiki pic.


SkyDee, June 29th, 2013, 10:46 pm ( Reply )


So hot.


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